my less then 10 minute poem

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Cate
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my less then 10 minute poem

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That I feel asleep
during the opening act
is no reflection on your
music making abilities.
You sir are a maestro,
a virtuoso to be sure.
It’s just that last night
a lullaby was played.
mickey_one
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Re: my less then 10 minute poem

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good work, Cate!
William
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Re: my less then 10 minute poem

Post by William »

Madam you stole this from the haiku section :lol:

God bless
William
Cate
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Re: my less then 10 minute poem

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I did not! It wandered over on it's own :razz:
If you noticed that you may have noticed it did a bit of wandering early this morning. It was there, then here, then gone, then back here again.
I'm afraid it's a restless poem, I think he was feeling uncertain about standing on his own.
Cate
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Re: my less then 10 minute poem

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mickey_one wrote:good work, Cate!
Thanks! :)
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