semi-permeable menbrain

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mat james
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semi-permeable menbrain

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my semi-permeable menbrain


doing nothing
thinking stops.

daydreams drift

and I fall
from desert dementia
to some other
dispossessed disposition

where even soul sinks to absent-mindedness

......a thump-landing

in the barrel of spaceless infinity

where I am
drop
pool
ripple

and my semi-permeable manbrain diffuses
an-omni-osmosis

from thisness
to thatness
in nothingness.



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"Without light or guide, save that which burned in my heart." San Juan de la Cruz.
Cate
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Re: semi-permeable menbrain

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Matt I absolutely love this.
The style and the form seem to pull us with you into your mind.
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My brother Mat,

The "thump landing" doesn't seem to fit with the rudderless drifting. A landing to
what? As "spaceless" follows, presumably there'd be no ground to thump with.
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Thanks Cate !

Steven, try listening to the thump of your heart as you shift zone and "land" in nothingness :D
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Post by Steven »

Mat,

I now understand what you meant with "land," in your response, emphasized.
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