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happiness


after the conversation, before
she walks the downward stairs
to leave, i catch her mirrored smile -

a drop of early dew gleams in the spring sun.
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Thank you Tom, for that lovely gentle image - it's good to keep in mind what mood/impression we leave behind when we feel crabby and want to say something mean before flouncing off.

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Pleasant.....very pleasant, Tom. I especially like the angle through which it appears.

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... "she" leaves... but only for a while, not for good... and the "I" knows... there will be more... "happiness" - just the beauty of being content with a moment ...
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