Another reminder of Egoless poetry site

Young dr. Freud · Post by **Young dr. Freud** » Mon Nov 22, 2004 6:26 pm

Notes on the Patient C2:

Patient shows no improvement. Over-compensates for gender-confusion by creating a new "location" trumpeting his masculinity.

Patient keeps insisting that others are not interesting or clever enough for him --- defense mechanism intended to squelch any subversive posts questioning his "authority."

Keeps talking about boxes.

YdF

Critic2 · Post by **Critic2** » Mon Nov 22, 2004 9:33 pm

it's weird but lies come in so many different shapes. the pre-write or egoless ownership lies were calculated to cause harm or maybe just to turn on the poster.

then lies from ydf are from the same school of distortion as the hallmark woman uses regularly. a little change, a little tweak and hope no-one notices. And the really yukky thing is I can actually imagine him rubbing his oily hands and snickering in a lonely, dark bed-sit (the Rigsby of this forum) as he thinks he'll lie about me saying others are not "clever enough". for "keeps insisting" read "never has said that". but then trolls are only interested in anyone taking their bait whatever the response is.

so there is no misunderstanding I have certainly said more than once about ydf (and a couple of others) you are dull, DULL *DULL*.
PLONK NO3. goes to ydf who stumbled across such a fun idea and has wasted it completely. Please address all future posts concerning me directly to my trash folder, Rigsby.

Avalon · Post by **Avalon** » Tue Nov 23, 2004 12:28 pm

Mikey or C2, you have a cheek talking about lies when you and your plonkers lie to get crooks off charges.
Go cast the first stone.
Adieu.

Critic2 · Post by **Critic2** » Tue Nov 23, 2004 2:11 pm

sorry, Avalon, your views on the legal profession have no interest to me at all. if you have personal problems in that area try talking to someone who cares.

if you write about poetry I will respond on the merits.

Young dr. Freud · Post by **Young dr. Freud** » Tue Nov 23, 2004 3:48 pm

Notes on the Patient C2:

Patient transferring very nicely now. But his chronic passive-aggressive posting will be difficult to control. He is completely unaware of how his egoless poetry monomania is preceived by others. Anyone who snickers is obviously an enemy. Paranoid.

YdF

Avalon · Post by **Avalon** » Tue Nov 23, 2004 5:35 pm

Mikey, methinks you are putting on the white wig of deflection, like your learned collegues do.
Young Dr Freud is spot on, as always in his analysis.
Adieu.

peter danielsen · Post by **peter danielsen** » Fri Dec 03, 2004 5:30 pm

"PD then posted to a proper site and had trouble accepting negative critiques."

I have now posted two poems on the "proper" site and recieved rather blunt and devestating critique - which I had and have trouble accepting. To realize this fact is I should think an important step towards trying to write much better texts. which is my aim.

I know this will seem like trying to run from the critique, but anyways I would like to point out that any text I have posted on this forum is written "live" that is the texts are written in 5-10 minutes without any work later work on them what so ever.

And... some of the critique on egoless show clear signs of poor knowledge on postmodern litterature.

Peter

Martine · Post by **Martine** » Fri Dec 03, 2004 6:42 pm

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