yin yin yin

peter danielsen · Post by **peter danielsen** » Tue Jun 03, 2003 5:32 pm

yin yin yin
what is it on your chin
is seems to be some toothpaste,
but where else have you been

I wonder could it be
you're seeing someone else
this Father Pete, who likes to swing
his great and holy bells

Have you been eating cookies
with icing on the top
you know when you begin with that
it's difficult to stop

And yin yin yin
there's more I need to know
is Father Pete a falling man
and would he mind the blow

I understand you like him
he's keeping up your chin
but is it only toothpaste
please tell me, is it yin

tom.d.stiller · Post by **tom.d.stiller** » Wed Jun 04, 2003 8:26 pm

Peter

though it pretends to come along like a nursery rhyme, this poem has a very ominous undertone... It is a serious and deep contribution to the debate on child abuse by priests that shakes every feeling heart...

A good poem, and a true one.

Tom

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Thu Jun 05, 2003 2:26 am

Peter
very sexual undertones with this alter boy?
nice dark piece
Georges

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Thu Jun 05, 2003 1:26 pm

Important piece, Peter, and well done. Many prayers for its being innocence.

~ Elizabeth