I love the door

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~greg
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I love the door

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I love the door - gmw

It lets me in.
It lets me out.
(And you can't ask more
Of a door.)

However,
(Although flatter In the chest,)
I love the window
Best.

It lets me in.
It lets me out.
Whenever the door
Is too proper.
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lizzytysh
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A whole lot said in a very few words, Greg. A metaphorical paradise.


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~greg wrote:I love the door - gmw

It lets me in.
It lets me out.
(And you can't ask more
Of a door.)

However,
(Although flatter In the chest,)
I love the window
Best.

It lets me in.
It lets me out.
Whenever the door
Is too proper.

i also love doors and windows, greg, they can be our ways out to freedom and all what it means (when open) and also our ways in for intimacy (when closed) - together with the walls and the roof, of course, not just by themselves :lol:.
but i think we must be careful with them, they can be a way out for love itself :).

"Love went on and on
Until it reached an open door
Then Love Itself
Love Itself was gone ..."
(LC's "Love Itself")
Waiting for the miracle to come...
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