I listen to Karen Carpenter, sister

[Boss]

I've said too much
over the past few days
can't control myself
And right now
I listen to Karen Carpenter
do her thing
she always reminded me
of you
I still have a scratched '45
from the 70's, somewhere

Today is your birthday
wherever you are
in whatever dimension
if any

Please, give my love to them

As for me, I must be quiet now
Think I'll walk the dog a bit

[lizzytysh]

This one touched me, Adam.

Happy Birthday from me for your love, wherever and however she is.


~ Lizzy

[Diane]

On a visit down here, can't ignore old friends. Hi Boss, nice to see you. How's the new Boss? Happy thoughts of your dear sister on her birthday.

Take good care,

Diane

[blonde madonna]

This poem got my attention Boss. Karen Carpenter is such an iconic figure of the 70's, with a tragic story. It prompts so many questions about the sister. The use of 'dimension' throws me though, why did you pick this word? And 'them'? I like the way you end it.

[Manna]

got my attention too. so naked.
that ending is kind of back-on-boogie-street to me. can't be so naked on boogie street.