New Poem (on the short side)
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New Poem (on the short side)
but that doesn't stop me writing. So here it is
OFTEN
Often, I have wondered.
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this poem is multi=layered, multi-cultural, and multi-millionaire material. I wonder if anyone would be bold enough (and underlined enough) to perform this at the pre-Glass thingy?
OFTEN
Often, I have wondered.
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this poem is multi=layered, multi-cultural, and multi-millionaire material. I wonder if anyone would be bold enough (and underlined enough) to perform this at the pre-Glass thingy?
Re: New Poem (on the short side)
- lonely as a cloud -
(Mickey_One you have a reputation for starting things and not finishing them.......or is that only in summer? Autumn is nearly here now.)
(Mickey_One you have a reputation for starting things and not finishing them.......or is that only in summer? Autumn is nearly here now.)
Last edited by damellon on Tue Aug 14, 2007 3:51 am, edited 1 time in total.
You only have to let the soft animal of your body
love what it loves.
from Wild Geese
Mary Oliver
love what it loves.
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Re: New Poem (on the short side)
-That floats on high o'er vales and hills-
(But it is apposite for my part of the world, there are fresh cut jonquils on my desk).
(But it is apposite for my part of the world, there are fresh cut jonquils on my desk).
the art of longing’s over and it’s never coming back
1980 -- Comedy Theatre, Melbourne
1985 -- State Theatre, Melbourne
2008 -- Hamilton, Toronto, Cardiff
2009 -- Rochford Winery, Yarra Valley
2010 -- Melbourne
2013 -- Melbourne, The Hill Winery, Geelong, Auckland
1980 -- Comedy Theatre, Melbourne
1985 -- State Theatre, Melbourne
2008 -- Hamilton, Toronto, Cardiff
2009 -- Rochford Winery, Yarra Valley
2010 -- Melbourne
2013 -- Melbourne, The Hill Winery, Geelong, Auckland
Re: New Poem (on the short side)
Hi Blonde Madonna
Often I have wondered ................. why you have chosen this unattractive avatar. Really doesn't reflect your upbeat personality. Can you ditch it with out incurring financial penalties?
Often I have wondered ................. why you have chosen this unattractive avatar. Really doesn't reflect your upbeat personality. Can you ditch it with out incurring financial penalties?

You only have to let the soft animal of your body
love what it loves.
from Wild Geese
Mary Oliver
love what it loves.
from Wild Geese
Mary Oliver
Re: New Poem (on the short side)
Mickey_One ...The 4 Goddesses and 1 demi-goddess.......may be available, by video link, for a courageously interpretative performance of your latest works as a taster to the Glass event. Better still if you could start another abbreviated piece. Then to the delight of all, we could present a trilogy.
You only have to let the soft animal of your body
love what it loves.
from Wild Geese
Mary Oliver
love what it loves.
from Wild Geese
Mary Oliver
Re: New Poem (on the short side)
Blonde Madonna - We really shouldn't indulge him. He'll casually drop by tomorrow and see a couple of hundred views unless we put a stop to it now. I know I started it but that's because it's late and I don't want to go to bed on my own. Anyway, if you don't, I won't. What do you say? If Manna and Christine and Lizzy know we're here they'll be over and before we know it..........
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You only have to let the soft animal of your body
love what it loves.
from Wild Geese
Mary Oliver
love what it loves.
from Wild Geese
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Re: New Poem (on the short side)
In this instance I was literally taking my cue from you damellon (and Mickey Numero Uno).
However, I also think it can be reactionary and relative. I may look chirpy on this forum but elsewhere…
Is it indulging him or making our own fun?
ps the picture is from one of my favourite books (The Arrival by Shaun Tan).
However, I also think it can be reactionary and relative. I may look chirpy on this forum but elsewhere…
Is it indulging him or making our own fun?
ps the picture is from one of my favourite books (The Arrival by Shaun Tan).
the art of longing’s over and it’s never coming back
1980 -- Comedy Theatre, Melbourne
1985 -- State Theatre, Melbourne
2008 -- Hamilton, Toronto, Cardiff
2009 -- Rochford Winery, Yarra Valley
2010 -- Melbourne
2013 -- Melbourne, The Hill Winery, Geelong, Auckland
1980 -- Comedy Theatre, Melbourne
1985 -- State Theatre, Melbourne
2008 -- Hamilton, Toronto, Cardiff
2009 -- Rochford Winery, Yarra Valley
2010 -- Melbourne
2013 -- Melbourne, The Hill Winery, Geelong, Auckland
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Re: New Poem (on the short side)
Monday night gigs as well? He is a busy man.
Can't keep up with your edits! Lizzy IS around somewhere but we can be like Mickey-the-one-and-only and leave things half finished.
Can't keep up with your edits! Lizzy IS around somewhere but we can be like Mickey-the-one-and-only and leave things half finished.
the art of longing’s over and it’s never coming back
1980 -- Comedy Theatre, Melbourne
1985 -- State Theatre, Melbourne
2008 -- Hamilton, Toronto, Cardiff
2009 -- Rochford Winery, Yarra Valley
2010 -- Melbourne
2013 -- Melbourne, The Hill Winery, Geelong, Auckland
1980 -- Comedy Theatre, Melbourne
1985 -- State Theatre, Melbourne
2008 -- Hamilton, Toronto, Cardiff
2009 -- Rochford Winery, Yarra Valley
2010 -- Melbourne
2013 -- Melbourne, The Hill Winery, Geelong, Auckland
Re: New Poem (on the short side)
WEll, too latte, Chi-Goddess. I see Manna and Christine haven't made it, yet; but I'm here amidst your and Blonde Madonna's presence and am resolutely not saying a woid.
HER edits... what about yours, Blonde Madonna
??
~ D-G Lizzy
HER edits... what about yours, Blonde Madonna


~ D-G Lizzy
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
~ Oscar Wilde
Re: New Poem (on the short side)
Blonde Madonna - You have me snookered there. No not gigging - practising in the next room. Banjo players are notoriously forceful - they have a taste for fancy licks and fast fingering. Before I know where I am I'll be shouting 'hot jiggety!' and blowing a mouth organ. Best go to bed. Lizzy - nice to see you, but I really have to go.
Talk again soon.
Talk again soon.
You only have to let the soft animal of your body
love what it loves.
from Wild Geese
Mary Oliver
love what it loves.
from Wild Geese
Mary Oliver
Re: New Poem (on the short side)
So do I, Damellon... two days late to work in the last two weeks is two days too many. An early night tonight, after a long weekend.
Hope you make it to the bed before the 'hot jiggety!' gets you, or it's all over.
~ Lizzy
Hope you make it to the bed before the 'hot jiggety!' gets you, or it's all over.
~ Lizzy
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
~ Oscar Wilde
Re: New Poem (on the short side)
Pre-glass is sand, pre-sand is rock, pre-rock is startdust, and miggy played guitar. I look forward to seeing your live version of Bird. And lovely as thou art/ even in that dress/ you still have to sort/ your own bloody mess.mickey_one wrote: this poem is multi=layered, multi-cultural, and multi-millionaire material. I wonder if anyone would be bold enough (and underlined enough) to perform this at the pre-Glass thingy?
Re: New Poem (on the short side)
"pre-sand is rock"
Um...? Don't know if you know, but you skipped about 20 steps here, more or less, depending on the kind of sand.
often I have wondered, eh? This is our new toy? how about...
OFTEN
usually, I am interlaced with the inexplicable.
Um...? Don't know if you know, but you skipped about 20 steps here, more or less, depending on the kind of sand.
often I have wondered, eh? This is our new toy? how about...
OFTEN
usually, I am interlaced with the inexplicable.
Re: New Poem (on the short side)
You're so good, Goddess MannaOFTEN
usually, I am interlaced with the inexplicable.


~ Lizzy
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
~ Oscar Wilde
Re: New Poem (on the short side)
I think it works better spoken.
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