Divine Mother

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Sebby
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Divine Mother

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Divine Mother

Divine Mother,

Won’t you smoke a while with me?

We’ll sing of mornings,

The arc of the sun

In the eastern sky.

Divine Mother,

Won’t you stay a while with me?

We’ll fill our veins

With those ticklish demons we crave.

Divine Mother,

Won’t you lay a while with me?

We’ll talk of tongues,

And tangos and secret bliss.

Divine Mother,

Won’t you die a while with me?

We’ll enter Heaven

With the wings we crave,

Fill our veins with the glow

Of Eden. Sing a while

Of the evening blues.

Divine Mother,

Won’t you melt a while with me?
There is a crack in everything...that's how the light gets in.

Wandering Mind
LauraL
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Re: Divine Mother

Post by LauraL »

that's beautiful !!
..saying your words were not empty ,
makes them no less hollow

littlecrow feb/07
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Re: Divine Mother

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Yes, it is beautiful, Sebby. Thank you for sharing it here.


~ Lizzy
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
Manna
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Re: Divine Mother

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Sounds like a song. Is it a song?
Sebby
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Re: Divine Mother

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Thanks all. Yes...this happens to be a song. Not completed, I guess, but a song...
Thank you for your comments.
There is a crack in everything...that's how the light gets in.

Wandering Mind
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Hi Sebby ~

From what I'm seeing so far, there's a very sensual quality to your poetry, which I like very much.


~ Lizzy
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
Sebby
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Re: Divine Mother

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Thanks much, Lizzy.
There is a crack in everything...that's how the light gets in.

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