Dear Leonard
Please sing for me one more time
With your voice so deep from cavern
With your voice so deep from the cavern
Please spell words for me one more time
With your voice from 1969.
and that boyish grin
That sparkles when you try to let someone in.
Let someone in, dear leonard.
Please sing for me one more time
like a drunk in a midnight choir
like a bird on a wire.
I will kneel down at your delta
at the alpha and the omega
Eyes closed, head bowed, hands folded.
I willl prostrate myself at the sound of your voice
and listen completely molded
Into your mother
Into your brother
into your sister
into your child
into your voice.
dear Leonard.
Dear Leonard
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st theresa
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Re: Dear Leonard
Your summoning is lovely, St. Theresa. I hope similar feelings expressed from around the world will ultimately bear fruit. I know how you feel.
~ Lizzy
~ Lizzy
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
~ Oscar Wilde
Re: Dear Leonard
My first impulse with this is to not like it very much, but I have made a conscious decision to try to have you help me like it. The first stanza is mostly fine except for that cliched sparkling grin. I like the weirdness of "voice so deep from cavern," though I don't know what is means. Is it deep as a cavern? Did a cavern make his voice deep?
I'd always taken his delta-alpha-omega to be a reference to femmie parts, the river where life is born... so I wonder what you think it means, and how he can have one. I like that you can mold yourself into whatever audience he may need for a work. I don't like that you're bowing down to pray to Lord Leonard, but if you want to do that, go ahead. (I'd rather see you call him brother, but it's your poem.) If you think it will help, go ahead.
I'd always taken his delta-alpha-omega to be a reference to femmie parts, the river where life is born... so I wonder what you think it means, and how he can have one. I like that you can mold yourself into whatever audience he may need for a work. I don't like that you're bowing down to pray to Lord Leonard, but if you want to do that, go ahead. (I'd rather see you call him brother, but it's your poem.) If you think it will help, go ahead.
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st theresa
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Re: Dear Leonard
Dear Manna
I composed that little ditty in about 10 minutes and, it was not a serious poem--sorry if you thought I meant it to be.
What it really was was a kind of reaction to all the adulation I see in the postings of this forum as well as to the comments on his song Dear Heather, which I personally happen to enjoy very much, but not everyone does. I was (I thought) echoing in my mind Leonard's dry humour --but please don't try to like it. I would be terribly embarrassed if anyone took it too seriously--I long since gave up any serious attempt at poetry, as I have no patience past 10 minutes or so . Sincerely
I composed that little ditty in about 10 minutes and, it was not a serious poem--sorry if you thought I meant it to be.
What it really was was a kind of reaction to all the adulation I see in the postings of this forum as well as to the comments on his song Dear Heather, which I personally happen to enjoy very much, but not everyone does. I was (I thought) echoing in my mind Leonard's dry humour --but please don't try to like it. I would be terribly embarrassed if anyone took it too seriously--I long since gave up any serious attempt at poetry, as I have no patience past 10 minutes or so . Sincerely
Re: Dear Leonard
ok.