Yes, a lot of good material is accumulating here, and it became difficult to respond to everything. Here are just a few points, and something extra.
Simon,
I also believe that this psalm (I.4) speaks of two problems, which may be two aspects of the same problem: the person as he stands before God, and the poet as he tries to express himself. You say it very beautifully, and it deserves to be repeated:
On a deeper level, the psalm may also be the expression of a dilemma in the sensitive poet, that is that he perceives his own words or attempts at expression as only the refection of his little will. Whereas when the poet is struck by cosmic beauty (the nakedness of the angel of song) he is faced with the incredible force of God's expression. He feels humbled, in a way helpless. So the psalm may describe the dialectics of expression versus perception. Expression is the manifestation of the little will. Perception is the manifestation of the authentic Will of the divine.
And indeed, “you” here can only be God, even if it is not written “You”.
I guess that as long as we focus on the question of the will, we need also to bring “If It Be Your Will” into the discussion (I’m sure you all know it by heart, but let’s give it a shot). This song is as close to prayer as any of the psalms in
Book of Mercy, or any other of LC’s songs (and it’s on the album issued the same year as the book). It is interesting to note that although the common phrase in Jewish (perhaps also Christian?) prayer is “may it be your will”, LC’s phrase is “
if it be your will”, which includes a stronger doubt that his request will be answered. Here too is the juxtaposition of the “little will” against the eternal one. But when he says:
If it be your will
that I speak no more,
and my voice be still
as it was before;
I will speak no more,
I shall abide until
I am spoken for,
if it be your will.
Does he really mean it? Is silence really an option for him? Can his “little will” be crushed completely? He must have felt so at times of depression and doubt, but the true poet in him always had the upper hand eventually.
If it be your will
that a voice be true,
from this broken hill
I will sing to you.
From this broken hill
all your praises they shall ring
if it be your will
to let me sing.
The broken hill, the broken Hallelujah, the broken world that needs to be mended; the crack for the light to come in. We will see a lot of that in
Book of Mercy. A famous Hassidic rabbi said “there is nothing whole as a broken heart”.
If it be your will,
if there is a choice,
let the rivers fill,
let the hills rejoice.
Let your mercy spill
on all these burning hearts in hell,
if it be your will
to make us well.
“If there is a choice” – as we’ve said earlier, he comes “awfully close” to determinism, but he still hopes, at least, that the choice exists.
Several biblical allusions here: the rivers, possibly Isaiah 35:6; the rejoicing hills, Isaiah 55:12, Amos 9:13, Psalms 65:13, 114:4.
And draw us near
and bind us tight,
all your children here
in their rags of light;
in our rags of light,
all dressed to kill;
and end this night,
if it be your will.
The tight binding is of Isaac (Genesis 22:9).
“rags of light” – one of his most beautiful images ever.
“dressed to kill” – or be killed, like Isaac.
“the night” – brings to mind
The Dark Night of the Soul by St. John of the Cross (San Juan de la Cruz), in which the soul travels through the night towards its union with God.