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mat james
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Post by mat james »

I love this line.
You steaming wasteland of piss and shit.
Banjo patterson said it too, in his wonderful poem, "Clancey of the Overflow":
I am sitting in my dingy little office, where a stingy
Ray of sunlight struggles feebly down between the houses tall,
And the foetid air and gritty of the dusty, dirty city
Through the open window floating, spreads its foulness over all


It (your line) makes me laugh as it is so full of feeling, albeit, pissedoffedness. HA!!

Try going for a walk in the forest or along the beach or maybe over the desert sands or,
Maybe read some of the poetry of Banjo Patterson.

:lol:
"Without light or guide, save that which burned in my heart." San Juan de la Cruz.
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Waiting For Suzanne
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Post by Waiting For Suzanne »

mat james wrote:I love this line.
You steaming wasteland of piss and shit.
Banjo patterson said it too, in his wonderful poem, "Clancey of the Overflow":
I am sitting in my dingy little office, where a stingy
Ray of sunlight struggles feebly down between the houses tall,
And the foetid air and gritty of the dusty, dirty city
Through the open window floating, spreads its foulness over all


It (your line) makes me laugh as it is so full of feeling, albeit, pissedoffedness. HA!!

Try going for a walk in the forest or along the beach or maybe over the desert sands or,
Maybe read some of the poetry of Banjo Patterson.

:lol:
it is rather travis bickle isnt it! :x
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