three poems

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SlightlyD
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three poems

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mat james
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It's poetry, slightlyD.

I love the imagery.
As a reader, I wonder if they are based on experience or imagination.

As someone who also has a go at writing poetry, I love the way you use repetitionn not only of words, but associated transmuting imagery facilitated by the several meanings of a word or phrase. Great stuff and truly poetical by my reckoning.
"Without light or guide, save that which burned in my heart." San Juan de la Cruz.
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