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Hi Vegard ~

Nice to see you, again.

This doesn't usually happen with me with your poems, but I'm feeling a bit foggy about the meaning of your second stanza [if that's what it would be called in this kind of structure], with the word "courageous" ~ it seems like the word would be something to the effect of "fearful" [to leave her because he doesn't know about their being additional lifetimes]. Can you explain how he's being courageous in staying? Thanks. It may just be some glitch in my thinking this morning; it's still a tad 'early,' as I've had only one cup of coffee :wink: .

~ Lizzy
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