fall plan

elazar · Post by **elazar** » Mon Apr 24, 2006 10:05 pm

unregister for me
flow to sea
then forward onward
east and west
ungripped
untethered
to another monster

Cohen Kid · Post by **Cohen Kid** » Tue Apr 25, 2006 11:42 am

Very lovely done

I hope I get the symbolic not totally wrong, but is it about a love who's very distant and out of reach... I see it like this: he/she'll move on, into the crowd, a different direction than you, disappearing from sight, into someone else's arms...
But maybe i'm totally wrong... it's nice poetry though... because I can make my own meaning of it... and some poems are too vague and leave me dizzy... Good

elazar · Post by **elazar** » Sun Apr 30, 2006 3:23 am

cohen kid,
thanks for the kind comments. i won't say what it means, but i really like how u read it.
salut
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dar · Post by **dar** » Sun Apr 30, 2006 3:32 am

Nice to see you elazar. Hope all is well. Your poem reminds me of LC's line about...."dragging your tail in the sea..." You know the Godzilla image...on to another monster? I think I get ya.