Poem Dead

Xavier Keyet · Post by **Xavier Keyet** » Sat Mar 15, 2003 4:50 pm

Sick man to hospital
Healthy man drives freeway home to dog
Sick man sicker
Healthy man runs over the dog
Sick man getting worse
Healthy man sad
Sick man dead
Healthy man sick
Dog dead
Healthy man in bad shape
Poem getting worse
Poem dead

Paula · Post by **Paula** » Sat Mar 15, 2003 5:59 pm

Well give it a good burial Xaiver I thought it was good.

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Sat Mar 15, 2003 6:07 pm

how funny.....the kick-the-dog syndrome from another slant...with a forward and reverse.....did you begin with another intent altogether?

linmag · Post by **linmag** » Sat Mar 15, 2003 7:50 pm

Now that sort of poetry I can relate to, Xavier. I love it

paula_hansen · Post by **paula_hansen** » Sat Mar 15, 2003 8:55 pm

Paula said "Well give it a good burial Xaiver I thought it was good."

good, hmm- about death I notice.