Crescent Moon On The Highway, Man With a Hat and Look At You

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Voo
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Crescent Moon On The Highway, Man With a Hat and Look At You

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Crescent Moon On The Highway


Lying here on this cold and misty Sunday afternoon
Cat on his blanket at my feet
The threat of rain outside my shuttered windows
I listen to Villanelle For Our Times by the master
Of the rough and tender voice
His verse running down my spine like a lover's fingers
Crooning bittersweet lyric into my ears with his distant tongue
The melody caresses me and makes me senseless
As he repeats "bitter searching of the heart" over and over and over
Until images conjure up from memory and lay themselves down
Upon my mind
You, in that convertible under the stars on that long ago highway
We were laughing like mad people, kissing more than paying attention
Music soaring on the radio and trailing off behind us into the desert wind
My hair whipping around us like long black scarves
And thinking that if I could die of joy, then I would surely die
We were racing under clear cold skies looking for rain and storm
Loving lightning and angry clouds
But finding none, we drove on into the night
Listening to Leonard and holding each other hard enough to bruise
Look, baby, you said and pointed to a crescent moon hanging low
In the sky on the side of the highway a thousand miles from nowhere
And we pulled over and danced underneath that moon
Toasted it with champagne and kisses no one had ever kissed before
While the music trailed off into silence and clicked to a stop as we
Stood in the glow of the headlights, our eyes locked onto one another
And our hearts as close as hearts can be
That long ago highway and that crescent moon and you
With your crooked smile and wind blown hair
How it all comes back to me now
Damn you, Leonard, with your bitter searching of the heart and your
Rough and tender poet's voice
Bringing the past alive and spotlighting the present with it's loneliness
And loss
Damn you, Leonard.


By Voo
December 4, 2005 5 p.m.
Sunday afternoon
Written while listening to Leonard Cohen's new CD Dear Heather.
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Man With A Hat

Hat on heart, he stands there looking lonely
Gazing into my eyes and through them past my soul
Toward some unknown inferno
Blazing quietly in a distant void
Now his forehead creases and his eyebrow lifts
And he smiles a tiny smile which makes me
Squirm, not knowing if it is for me or for the girl
From yesterday who still lives in his mind
Man with a hat, simple, yet debonair, wistful as a child
And deep as Rodan's Thinker
Always he will live on my living room wall
In the gold gilded frame over the ancient piano
Looking at me with his melancholy face
And the hat that another woman gave him
But always knowing, both of us
That it was my camera and my love
That took the picture.

by Voo
Jan 7, 2005 2:26 p.m.
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Look At You

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Look At You

You said you'd never smile again
After surviving the wars of love
And coming out on the other side wounded
And haunted by the ghosts of pain
Don't look at me, you said, I'm half a man
I'm crippled and scarred and you are still
Beautiful
No one can mend me now
But I didn't listen or take heed to your
Warnings
I loved you till you hated me and loved
Me once again
Now look at you, you're laughing
Your scars unseen
Your heart healed in my tender hands
Look at you, my love
My tenacity has worked a miracle
My stubborn hope has given you back your smile.

By Voo

Jan 7, 7:30 p.m.
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Sorry, I resized the above picture 3 times but when it posted, it came out full sized. If this is a problem, let me know and I'll delete it. But I wrote the poem as a result of seeing this photo of The Man.
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Post by peter danielsen »

Hi voo,

Nice poem

Peter
Diane

Post by Diane »

Crescent Moon On The Highway is a very evocative poem, Voo. It makes me long to be crazily in love like that.
Damn you, Leonard, with your bitter searching of the heart and your
Rough and tender poet's voice
Bringing the past alive and spotlighting the present with it's loneliness
And loss
Damn you, Leonard.
Yes, damn him. And bless him too, huh?

I'll read more of your poems later. Welcome to the forum! Glad you found your way here :D .

Good wishes

Diane
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Post by lizzytysh »

Ahhhhhhh, Welcome to the Forum, Voo :D 8) :D !!! You're going to LOVE it here :D ! No 'speaking into the void' :D .

Wonderful :D ! Sublime :D ! Unique 8) ! All three 8) on all three :D !!! Putting words to some of the feelings I've had as I've gazed at those photos, yet so much more clearly given voice through you and your words. You will add much that's lovely and expressive here!

I've always loved that "Look At You" photo of Leonard ~ great take on it that you've given 8) .

~ Lizzy
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