YdF wrote:
Greg,
The man's name is Ron.
Indeed. I doubt if I have ever seen a truer
sentiment expressed on this Forum.
But of course it was a yourian-slip.
I was imagining that "Ron Cornelius" looks exactly like "Ronald McDonald".
"Don" for short.
~~
so anyway
And Ron got paid what would have been almost a year's
average salary in the Seventies for one chord change?
And Leonard didn't know about it?
His manager kept it all from him? No way.
YdF
Way! Way!
There's always a way, YdF.
Here's one way:
First, I don't know about that being a year's salary for Ron.
Wikipedia
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/New_Skin_f ... d_Ceremony
(which, interestingly, refers this very thread as its source,)
prints the amount of the Ron settlement as "$8 500", with
a mysterious space between the 8 and the 5 (at least that's how
it appears in my browser). When I first saw that I just assumed
that they meant $80500, since that made more sense to me.
(I am aware that some people are dyslexic about ',' and '.' in numbers)
But in any case it was not so large an amount relative to Cohen's
income at the time that it should have been brought to his
attention for that reason alone. LC was doing very well financially
in those years.
In some ways too well:
LC: "My standard of living went down as my income
increased ... Now ... I find myself living in
hotel rooms, breathing bad air, and very constrained
as to movement. " - Nadel)
"Constrained as to movement",
means that his manager was indeed keeping things away from him.
Also, to repeat the obvious, once again,
LC has been proven to be perfectly capable of being
utterly oblivious as to the comings and goings
of much larger sums of money than that.
In any case it's an odd and pathological musician
that occupies his mind with the details of the salaries
and pay-offs of his backing band members.
LC isn't even a musician, primarily.
He is a poet, who happens to perform some of his work to the
accompaniment of music. And his mind in those years had many
other things to be imagining.
He never liked the business side of things.
He always entrusted that to others.
~
Now I recall having this difference of opinion with you before, YdF.
It's called, in linguistics, the "descriptive" vs "proscriptive"
raging- although dead -controversy.
The proscriptive side says, religiously, that
"a preposition is a poor word to end a sentence with."
Whereas the descriptive side observes, scientifically,
that it happens all the time, and passes no judgment.
Previously I had simply observed that many artists do find
the business side of things to be extremely distasteful,
and that they try to pay as little attention to it as possible.
And I also observed that criticism, such as yours, about that,
was really implicitly complaining and bragging and moralizing
on your part.
Complaining that life has been tough for you.
But bragging that nevertheless you have yourself dealt with it
in some mature and responsible manner which (-moralizing -)
is what you expect of every one else, or they deserve whatever
happens to them.
And I presumed that you yourself had made a living as an artist
at some time and enjoyed, or at least had no problem with,
the business end.
And I asked you (implicitly)
"Perhaps you do handle your own finances exceedingly well."
And you answered:
"Yes. Would you like to join my pyramid?".
Everything's a joke with you, YdF.
But then again I wouldn't read your posts otherwise,
since the morally-self-assured side of them makes my skin crawl.
As an aside I would also like to say now that the amount of posturing
that occurs on this Forum is absolutely incredible.
I have always, often mistakenly, tended to regard this kind of thing as
people's attempt at humor and role-playing. And some of them
mean it that way. And sometimes it's funny and sometimes
it's not. But they're the ones I like.
There are however others here who are authentically delusional.
They have no insight at all into what motivates them.
Which is, quite simply, that they are growing old.
And lonely. And are raging against the dying of their
little bit of a crack of light.
Which would be fine, except that without a little self-awareness
their rage comes off as a regression into adolescent posturing.
And it's odd to me that this is a Leonard Cohen Forum,
because it means they have absorbed absolutely nothing
of what Cohen worked for- his whole life to express.
Which I can not summarize. But a sentence from Nadel
is suggestive of it:
There is little of the inauthentic in this writing,
although one must always guard against the con, as
Cohen reminded a Maclean's journalist in 1972, adding
that "There's no story so fantastic that I cannot
imagine my self the hero. And there's no story so
evil that I cannot imagine myself the villain."
Self-awareness!
Is where it's at,
Man.
~~
Now again, I don't think LC is a saint.
For that matter I don't even think he's even
a very nice person all the time.
However, the one hypothesis I simply can not buy
is that LC himself tacked on the '#2'
- just in order to screw Ronald MacDonald out of his rights.
Or even that it was someone in CBS - not LC
- who tacked on the '#2' - in order to screw Ron.
Because LC would certainly have asked about that.
And if he'd been told about that, --if he'd been told
that that was the reason they changed the title on him,
--I just don't think he would have gone along with it.
Pride, too, is a baser motive.
And I think LC would have been too proud to go along with it.
So I don't think that was the case.
I do not consider it inconceivable.
But I just don't think it's the case.
Because this is what I think is the case:
LC tacked on the '#2' himself, for internal artistic reasons.
Which may have helped CBS screw Ron out of his rights.
But that wasn't LC's intention.
And I don't think he was aware until now that
anyone ever claimed it had that effect in the U.S.
And now here is the reason I think LC added the '#2' himself.
Ron claims that he co-wrote "Chelsea Hotel" (#1)
by improving on some earlier version,
and that #2 is identical to #1.
The reason it has a No. 2 behind it is that he tried to cheat me
out of my share by recopyrighting it that way (he changed nothing)
– it was just "Chelsea Hotel "
Unless we somehow get to hear the pre-#1 version,
which is impossible, we will never, -ever ever,
-be able judge the facts of this case completely
objectively.
All we can do now is to think hard about what
difference there actually is between #1 and #2,
and decide for ourselves if it warranted a name change.
Because if we can't, honestly, see a sufficient difference,
then Ron's claim becomes plausible.
However the fact is that very many people do see
a very big difference between #1 and #2.
Devlin put it this way:
Whereas the much longer original song meanders and wallows,
'#2' is concise. It has a simple acoustic broken-chord accompaniment,
with a subtle hint of trombone on the chorus, and a sombre but tender
vocal line.
To my way of thinking, a change from meandering and wallowing,
to concise, is a very great and significant change indeed.
To my way of thinking it would itself justify changing the title.
But wait - there's more!
The really biggest difference between #1 and #2 is the new last stanza:
I don't mean to suggest that I loved you the best,
I can't keep track of each fallen robin.
I remember you well in the Chelsea Hotel,
that's all, I don't even think of you that often.
Ron would say that that's just an arbitrary stanza
picked at random in order to make a trivial variation
intended solely to break off the screw that the "#2"
was screwing him with.
But anyone who sees it that way is tone-deaf in regards to poetry.
Moreover, anyone who reads that stanza
as a simple case of LC bragging about what a hard a dude
he is in regards to other people's lives,
is simply ignorant of the context of Cohen's
life and work at the time.
"I can't keep track of each fallen robin"
- is not a brag.
It is a prayer for strength.
It is to be associated with "Night Comes On"
And the night came on
It was very calm
I wanted the night to go on and on
But she said, Go back to the World
(
it also reminds me, somehow, of this:
RHETT: Frankly my dear, I don't give a damn.
...
SCARLETT: Tara! Home.
I'll go home. And I'll think of some way to get him back.
After all, tomorrow is another day!
)
"Chelsea Hotel (#1)" was pure indulgence in the
paradoxical pleasures of melancholia.
It was "meandering and wallowing" in self-pity.
Here are the relevant events:
Janis Joplin died in 1970.
Daphne Richardson committed suicide in 1973.
But then:
Lorca Sarah was born, in 1974.
And in 1974 "Chelsea Hotel"
became "Chelsea Hotel #2".
Anyone who can't see through the stanza now
- has no business listening to Cohen.
Ira Nadel 'in A Life In Art' wrote:
The Energy of Slaves registers a dual loss: of art
and of love, which often disappear together, as in
"The Progress of My Style". Such loss can only be
recovered by the facing poems, which frequently
accompany and/or revise the original work and possibly
bridge or destroy the gap between art and desire
I don't know what Nadel meant by "the gap",
but my point is that LC's work of the time
- which included "Energy of Slaves" and "Chelsea Hotel",
- involved a kind of fetish of "facing poems"
- poems that commented on other (facing) poems.
And this is exactly the context in which
"Chelsea Hotel" became "Chelsea Hotel #2".
Many people have noticed that "Chelsea Hotel #2"
expresses a very different - more mature - attitude
than "Chelsea Hotel". What I'm saying now is that
I think that Cohen very likely considered at some
point including both "Chelsea Hotel #1" and
"Chelsea Hotel #2" - on facing pages. But then
decided that the "#2" was sufficient a signal
that this was a comment song on an implicit '#1' song.
The exact revision being, quite obviously, the last stanza
Anyone can guess, without having to see it written out,
that "Chelsea Hotel #1" must have differed from
#2 by not containing that stanza.
In brief, it is my guess that "Chelsea Hotel #2"
was named for internal artistic reasons.
Not to screw Ron Cornelius.
~~~
ps:
If anyone here has any question as to which is the
more essential aspect of this song,
the lyrics or the music,
listen to this snippet that I mentioned before
http://relay.twoshakesofalambstail.com/solo.mp3
It's about 40 seconds long.
Pay close attention to the last 5 sec.
At what point do you recognize the song?