
I've always loved the mixed emotional tones evoked throughout this song - they beautifully encapsulate the difficult relationship dynamics portrayed or hinted at.

In terms of lines, I echo your choices Shane and Ali, but will add another couple that often spring to mind for me:
"I hear that you're building your little house deep in the desert
You're living for nothing now, I hope you're keeping some kind of record".
You're right, Ali, cutting and pasting the lot may be the way to go!

Cheers

Andrew (Darby)