No comment eh?
Fair enough.
At least I admit what I am, and what I've done.
I can look at myself in the mirror, and say ~
Vince, you're a drunken old troll...
albeit a damned handsome one.
You on the other hand cannot even admit to being wrong, and apologise for it.
For shame.
Linda, we're through.
Vincent.
Lamentation (29/1/16)
Critic2 gave a good crit on Boss' poem.
It must have taken him some time to do. Maybe just saying 'thankyou' and leaving it at that would have been more appropriate Boss.
Linda Lakeside and Perth aka Vince.
I followed both your postings last night and tonight.
It did appear that you contradicted yourself Linda.
An apology might not go amiis.
It must have taken him some time to do. Maybe just saying 'thankyou' and leaving it at that would have been more appropriate Boss.

Linda Lakeside and Perth aka Vince.
I followed both your postings last night and tonight.
It did appear that you contradicted yourself Linda.
An apology might not go amiis.

Alan, I'm not bickering with her. It's finished.
My words would fall on deaf ears anyway.
Women!
It's all here in black and white for anyone to read.
First she says she has never sent me a pm, then it's "oh I remember every word I said in that pm"
Sirus, thanks for your support sir.
Sirus wrote:
My words would fall on deaf ears anyway.
Women!
It's all here in black and white for anyone to read.
First she says she has never sent me a pm, then it's "oh I remember every word I said in that pm"

Sirus, thanks for your support sir.
Sirus wrote:
Well, I won't be holding my breath that's for sure.An apology might not go amiis.
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Lemon Onions
Dear Adam, I see that this morning you took time to add a Psalm to your poem. But i don't think that you have made any changes to the poem itself. What a shame. Revising is harder work than creating the original, but just as rewarding.
I see as well that you have not acknowledged the comments of a number of posters here. That, of course, is a matter for your judgement.
I do like your new title, though- Lemon Onions.
I see as well that you have not acknowledged the comments of a number of posters here. That, of course, is a matter for your judgement.
I do like your new title, though- Lemon Onions.