Poem No. 6

evanw60 · Post by **evanw60** » Sat May 14, 2005 4:55 am

Young dr. Freud wrote:Adolescent fantasies. Grow up.

I agree.

Teratogen · Post by **Teratogen** » Sat May 14, 2005 10:18 am

Ah, YdF, glad to meet your acquaintance once again!
...now get the fuck out.

Joe Way · Post by **Joe Way** » Tue Jun 07, 2005 5:58 am

Good rhymes, T. I'll stay away from the politics, but I saw your name as the last reply on the thread and jumped to the conclusion that it was your poem. As critic2 said, it was ambitious and anyone who labels this simply adolescent has never worked with that number of couplets, (I'll bet!).

Good job.

Joe

Teratogen · Post by **Teratogen** » Wed Jun 08, 2005 11:28 am

thank you, joe. it is much appreciated coming from you.

Young dr. Freud · Post by **Young dr. Freud** » Wed Jun 08, 2005 2:14 pm

and anyone who labels this simply adolescent has never worked with that number of couplets, (I'll bet!).

If I want to "work" with that number of couplets...I'll read Dryden or Pope. Not the mewlings and pukings of an over-grown, over-indulged California Crybaby.

YdF

sirus · Post by **sirus** » Wed Jun 08, 2005 7:52 pm

Well said YdF.

linda_lakeside · Post by **linda_lakeside** » Wed Jun 08, 2005 9:57 pm

YdF, Sirus,

Really? Do you think Dryden or Pope will enter our poetry contests.

Linda.

sirus · Post by **sirus** » Wed Jun 08, 2005 11:06 pm

Not the mewlings and pukings of an over-grown, over-indulged California Crybaby.

I was actually agreeing with the above.

Do you feel that remarks such as "now get the fuck out" will encourage others to participate in future poetry competitions, or even post a message on this board?

Teratogen · Post by **Teratogen** » Thu Jun 09, 2005 9:59 am

bwahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!

sirus the virus has infected this forum, and ydf, well... he's a wannabe.