Lies

Cia · Post by **Cia** » Sat May 14, 2005 2:26 pm

Lies

The rise the fall
The picture of it all
My heart my mind
My soul of some kind
The wind the dust
The unsettled lust
My confession my lies
My false nameless cries
The mess the hollow
The untruth to swallow
My guilt my disguise
My greed in my eyes
The beginning the end
The truth to be bend

Some one better stop me now

hugs Cia

Critic2 · Post by **Critic2** » Sat May 14, 2005 8:46 pm

Cia wrote:Lies

The rise the fall
The picture of it all
My heart my mind
My soul of some kind
The wind the dust
The unsettled lust
My confession my lies
My false nameless cries
The mess the hollow
The untruth to swallow
My guilt my disguise
My greed in my eyes
The beginning the end
The truth to be bend

Some one better stop me now hugs Cia

consider yourself stopped, you bloody Prize Winners, you are all the same!

Cia · Post by **Cia** » Sat May 14, 2005 9:25 pm

Poem attempts closed, blocked by Critic 2 - well, it was fun as long as it lasted

hugs as usual, Cia

Cia · Post by **Cia** » Mon May 16, 2005 9:37 am

Last night in the chatroom I got this link from Henning: http://www.tea-and-oranges.de/mp3/lies.mp3

So too late to stop me C2

Thank you Henning for making my words to a song, it really did catch the mood I was in when writing it.

hugs from Cia

Tri-me · Post by **Tri-me** » Mon May 16, 2005 5:23 pm

don't stop This is familiar internal dialogue, brilliant

Cia · Post by **Cia** » Tue May 17, 2005 10:34 pm

Thank you Tri-me, I will trust you and post another one.

Let's see if Henning will use this one too, he does make it sound so much better than what I can do on my own.

Gone

The scattered love runs out of time
Your hiding days are through
The passing of the sacred line
My love has gone with you

The secrets and the telling lies
Your hardness and your vain
The loneliness in wasted cries
My love has drowned in pain

The longing for the time that was
Your passion and devotion
The future now is cold because
My love has lost emotion

The truth is not a friend of mine
Your secrets were too many
The trust so easy to define
My love, there is not any

hugs from Cia

Pete · Post by **Pete** » Wed May 18, 2005 1:06 am

Cia, your poetry embraces my senses

I await the next one with anticiapation

Hug
from Pete

Andrew McGeever · Post by **Andrew McGeever** » Wed May 18, 2005 1:44 am

The truth to be be bent
The truth to bend

The last line

Maybe it's my clumsy use of language.

Andrew.

Andrew McGeever · Post by **Andrew McGeever** » Wed May 18, 2005 2:01 am

omit one "be" in the first line.
Such old-fashioned clumsiness shouldn't be permitted on this highly esteemed forum. Mea culpa for the extra "be".
Andrew.

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Wed May 18, 2005 7:23 am

CIA! I LOVE these!

If only that phone call had lasted longer, the trip had been made

. Dang, girl !

Love,
Lizzy

Cia · Post by **Cia** » Wed May 18, 2005 8:04 pm

I do not think you are the one with a clumsy language Andrew, it's me

You are absolutely right, now how do I remove the "bees" without getting stinged

Thanx for your correction, I am pleased you took the time. I should have sticked to writing it in my native language - but only Peter Danielsen would have been able to read it then.

Pete and Lizzy, you both flatter me - and as you know - it will take you everywhere

hugs from Cia

Cia · Post by **Cia** » Wed May 18, 2005 8:39 pm

If only that phone call had lasted longer, the trip had been made

. Dang, girl !

Lizzy, I just really understood your comment here - yes if only - but I am a saint

hugs Cia

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