Poem No. Troll

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Critic2
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Poem No. Troll

Post by Critic2 »

I wear my passion on my sleeve
-along with occasional runny nose snot
on those no kleenex in sight days-
REALLY, there are no secrets here


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I think the idea of a troll post is to make the reader unsure if it is genuine.
this one was so poor as a troll it got right up my nose, let' sleave it there. 'snot good at all.
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Post by LaurieAK »

sigh* Another poem about snot and one's delicate nature to wear their heart on their sleeve...these things are a dime a dozen....BUT, i never get tired of reading them.

regards,
L
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Post by linda_lakeside »

This one did sadden me. Defeat, loss and a self-effacing acceptance of the bitter truth. Through bitter searching of the heart ...

Linda.
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