Truth be told

[Amonynous]

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[evanw60]

Ooh I like this very much.

"There are caresses
And smiles
Which do not lie"

I think your first stanza is stronger, but both are equally powerful.

[Amonynous]

Thanks mate, I'm glad you liked it,






By the way what happened with your poem "Verses of love and mercy"?

I got a small glimpse at it earlier and thought I'd read through it more thoroughly later on, but now it seems you've edited it out