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Gideon
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For my critics

Post by Gideon »

Last night in the town centre I came across a bin,
Labelled, ‘Unwanted literature, please place within.’
So I wrote a poem and put it in.
Critic2
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Post by Critic2 »

Gideon, this reminds me of Pam Ayres, "tribute" to the Big Event coming your way soon,

Dejected Thoughts on the Royal Wedding
By Pam Ayres

My mother said "Say nothing,
If you can't say something nice."
So from my poem you can see
I'm taking her advice.
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