Behind your Beauty

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Amonynous
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Behind your Beauty

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elazar
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"why havent i noticed you before"really says alot.and the whole frost thing works for the concept nicely.i really like this poem.
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I loved the frost and snow-woman metaphor. Icy-cold.
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You should have seen the woman......
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I can...through your words! 8)
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