Sand Dunes

[Amonynous]

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[LaurieAK]

Vegard~This is rich with imagery. So exotic. My favorite lines is:
"I grieve for my loss and everything I've found". A "wink of false delight" is also wonderful.
For some reason, after reading it through i focused on the last word of each line and think i found a 'bonus.' To me, it reads like a "list-poem." Your use of great descriptive words allows for this (i think).
The rhyme in your last line is perfect as is the notion. When reading the final stanza's line ends, you get: "denial(,) it shapes someday" This is one of those poems i wish i wrote myself. cheers, Laurie

[Vesuvius]

Vegard, this was so sad and mournful. I hope you do not suffer from sunlight deprivation during the long winters in your native country. Could this contribute to the generally depressive note to your poetry? Not that it's a bad thing.