The Slow Drip

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bobbyjmorris
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The Slow Drip

Postby bobbyjmorris » Fri Dec 07, 2018 11:10 pm

My poem called "The Slow Drip". In response to the patience of Liberation. Written and #performed in Mina Clavera, Argentina. 30 Seconds.

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Liberation will take
The distance of our disappointment
To give Herself
Such that Her joy is felt
In the shape of our longing


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performance: https://youtu.be/vWf3u2LbPdA
solongleonard
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Re: The Slow Drip

Postby solongleonard » Fri Dec 07, 2018 11:47 pm

as usual you perform beautifully. my brain, however, is taking longer than usual to understand but I know there is real meaning there. perhaps it is calculated to not reveal itself easily to old geezers? if I was English I would describe myself, these days, as a slow drip.
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Geoffrey
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Re: The Slow Drip

Postby Geoffrey » Sat Dec 08, 2018 12:14 pm

interesting words, and a perfect video accompanying them.
it's good to see someone else taking the lead in this section.
thank you! please post more :-)
bobbyjmorris
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Re: The Slow Drip

Postby bobbyjmorris » Tue Dec 11, 2018 5:07 am

i just tend to stop when if i would write more i would be further confused... how this one is sitting with me recently, is that there's some connection between our lack and our fufillment - and maybe the slo-dripness of it all aint such a problem?
solongleonard wrote:
Fri Dec 07, 2018 11:47 pm
as usual you perform beautifully. my brain, however, is taking longer than usual to understand but I know there is real meaning there. perhaps it is calculated to not reveal itself easily to old geezers? if I was English I would describe myself, these days, as a slow drip.
bobbyjmorris
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Re: The Slow Drip

Postby bobbyjmorris » Tue Dec 11, 2018 5:08 am

ok! and thank you for the sentiment.
Geoffrey wrote:
Sat Dec 08, 2018 12:14 pm
interesting words, and a perfect video accompanying them.
it's good to see someone else taking the lead in this section.
thank you! please post more :-)

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