My Robin Returns

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Jimmy O'Connell
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My Robin Returns

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My Robin Returns

Stands on the wooden trestle fence
its head turned towards me.
I stand at the kitchen sink
watching him watching me.

Whose world will quake first?
Whose trance-like eye will break
the tensed silence between us?
If I move away from the kitchen window

I will miss his next move and I will
have lost out on his magic. His standing
there watching me is him acknowledging
that I too exist and have a being that is of interest

to him just as I acknowledge his being
as of interest to me. Each of us sustaining
one another in this place at this time.
A garden wall and a kitchen window.
Oh bless the continuous stutter
of the word being made into flesh
-The Window-
Sideways
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Re: My Robin Returns

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This is a very nice gentle poem, Jimmy. Thanks for sharing
yeah, well, errrrm, hum, yeah, ok, I dunno, articulation is not my fing, who cares, SHUT IT YOU MUPPET, blah blah blah
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Sideways wrote:This is a very nice gentle poem, Jimmy. Thanks for sharing
:lol:
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It is a nice and gentle poem, it paints a peaceful picture and reading it I feel calm.
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Geoffrey wrote:
Sideways wrote:This is a very nice gentle poem, Jimmy. Thanks for sharing
:lol:

Hello Geoffrey, I remember years ago you said you had a home movie of your first, very nervous, attempt at oral sex. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
yeah, well, errrrm, hum, yeah, ok, I dunno, articulation is not my fing, who cares, SHUT IT YOU MUPPET, blah blah blah
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Lovely poem about my favourite bird.

Here is my resident male who I have named Robbie, outside my front door this morning :)
Robbie.JPG
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musicmania wrote:Lovely poem about my favourite bird.

Here is my resident male who I have named Robbie, outside my front door this morning :)
Robbie.JPG

absolutely beautiful
yeah, well, errrrm, hum, yeah, ok, I dunno, articulation is not my fing, who cares, SHUT IT YOU MUPPET, blah blah blah
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