The unified heart

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peter danielsen
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The unified heart

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The unified heart

Oh woman, many grains of sand
has filled the hourglass
I sense the warmness of your hand
as we the graveyard pass

But grains of sand will never be
eternity to us
the fading heart will be dissolved
the unified will blush

And time has never had a heart
so angels join along
the sacred moment of a kiss
throughout the book of song

It's written in your lovely eyes
that heaven has a leak
so we can dance, oh chosen one
forever cheak to cheak.
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lizzytysh
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Post by lizzytysh »

Dear Peter,

The beauty of your love poem bears the handing of a rose.

~Lizzytysh
Jane Greenwood
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Death, life and love

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A fine example of how death is not just the negative opposition to life, but also deepens the feelings of life.

J.G
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