To my Goddess, on our first anniversary

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Mercurio
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To my Goddess, on our first anniversary

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In my Life I want angels
and above them all is you.
My Goddess is not looking for a Servant or a Slave,
instead I ask her, "let me be your right hand"

And I move my right hand just here,
like this, mmmm like this
I need to sweep your hair away for a moment,
because..I need to sweep your hair away because...

I am going to kiss you. I need to move your hair away because...

I will kill 20 traitors and 47 wholly innocent people because I need to kiss you.
I need to kiss your neck.
There is your neck and here is my need. I know the answer.
Look at me, ask me any question. I know the answer

Did I tell you I need to kiss you?
first I will move your hair away

Special Offer, "For this Lifetime Only",
ask anything of me, Goddess. Here I am.
Do you expect anything more in future?
I'm running late for the past.

I need to sweep your hair away
for a clean start
every day.
I need to kiss you because...

Mercurio

Dedicated to my Goddess, on our First Anniversary. It's hard to believe it's been a whole week already
Cate
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Re: To my Goddess, on our first anniversary

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Over the top of course, but it complementary works.
I hope your lady likes her anniversary poem Mercutio - she's a lucky lady.
Last edited by Cate on Wed May 28, 2014 3:21 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: To my Goddess, on our first anniversary

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Do you expect anything more in future?
I'm running late for the past.
LOVE how these two lines work together... and how you've conceptualized into words your last line.
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
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