Liffey Valley Shopping Centre

This is for your own works!!!
Post Reply
User avatar
Jimmy O'Connell
Posts: 881
Joined: Thu Aug 17, 2006 10:14 pm
Location: Ireland

Liffey Valley Shopping Centre

Post by Jimmy O'Connell »

Liffey Valley Shopping Centre

What would people do if they didn’t
Go shopping -- sit in this mezzanine
Food court to queue in front of KFC,
McDonalds or the Kylemore?

Sip tea or coffee, nibble on a chocolate
Muffin, pretend not to watch one another
Reading, gesticulating, whispering intently?

Or stare into the endless moment that
Is time opening, a speckled orange tulip,
To sepia sunshine? Attend time as it explodes

To this moment asking, What would people do
If they didn’t take elevators to waiting
Wafts of coffee, metallic on the tongue?
Oh bless the continuous stutter
of the word being made into flesh
-The Window-
User avatar
lizzytysh
Posts: 25531
Joined: Thu Jun 27, 2002 8:57 pm
Location: Florida, U.S.A.

Re: Liffey Valley Shopping Centre

Post by lizzytysh »

Enjoy the images that are real in mall sitting. Been many years since I've had reason to sit in one [barely even gone to one], but your images resonate with what I remember. Interesting final stanza.
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
Post Reply

Return to “Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members”