Poem No 1

[superkalifragilist]

Rare girl, like you
whose pride are you?
My son's or my nephew's?

I'm sure you are my son's
because my nephew
jealous of my son
would never ever
find a girl better than you

Rare girl, like you
whose pride are you?
America's or England's?

Because i'm sure i have seen you
in England and in Paris too
All i'm asking from you
is to tell me too, how many
boys like you are there out there?

My niece is a spinster
and my daughter bulimic
where will i find boys
like you to love them too?
Rare girl, like you
do you love babies too?
How many babies will you
give birth to to make your
grandmother smile like you?

Rare girl, like you
what is your country's
plans for you?

My son loves you and
wants to live with you
for a while at least

Bring your friends too
my nephew is alone
at home and all he does
is playing to to.

[fishfishquaileye]

def potential but some mistakes as well.

last line "to to" is two too many or at least one too.


and somehow it would be enough for your nephew to find a girl equal, why does better come in?