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I'm not sure if you're looking for a response, these seem personal perhaps they are letters to Leonard, but you're posting so I'm going to go with the assumption that you are.

The first one, the twin made me think of 1000 kisses deep. To be honest I had some trouble sticking with it but I'll try reading again later. Your second piece though I liked quite a bit. I'm not exactly sure what's going on but I liked the dropped in conversational tone of it.
you are a substitute for my best friend who no matter what
she did whenever is absent since she and i have nothing in common except caesar salad, pizza,
and rarely a little beef if the birthdays of her sex and the city friends allow.
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