Something warm

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rmorgan
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Something warm

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Suddenly, everyone’s parents were dying
Falling down stairs and crashing the walls
Tumbling like the leaves outside
Wilting like weightwatchers gone wild.
Funerals, eulogies
Kaddishes were sung
In tearfilled voice by trembling sons
Children not so young
United unexpectedly in grief

By stealth, with little warning
In the age of global warming
The generations come to pass
Fathers and canes bearing red medallions
Mothers in nursing uniform
Neat and tidy in their rows
Eyes right
Eyes front and down

The generation passing home
Some ranks are silent, some alone
Others are holding hands, waving goodbye
To their world Forever England
To heavens behind the hedge rows
Their pea-soup Jerusalems.
Their absences seeped out
Began to flood the land
We reached for something warm, and dry
And human that remained.
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fishfishquaileye
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Re: Something warm

Post by fishfishquaileye »

Hello Ruthie, from the title I presumed this poem would concern a cardigan or even a duffle-coat. I was so wrong!


This is a lovely, moving composition. Thanks for sharing
rmorgan
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Re: Something warm

Post by rmorgan »

Oh Fisheye .. it's the old Bait and Switch!

I'll send you a duffel coat if you need one.

I'm happy that you like the poem. I know you are a tough critic to please ... :D

Be well

Ruthie
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