Late late entry section

Critic2 · Post by **Critic2** » Fri Oct 29, 2004 3:28 pm

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Seedy · Post by **Seedy** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 12:26 am

I thought this might be the right place unless it is too late!

Taxi turns away from Hotel Freedom
Alone with a suitcase in his hand
He wanders of to his room
Long curtains in a misty dirty tan
Hangs like lost lovers drawn apart

Cheap grey toiletpaper and two towels
In folded shape for a luxury look
No sewing kit, no bathing cap
But loneliness creeping out of the walls
He checks the minibar and bed

The smell of sex hangs in the room
But the room is cold and empty
We hope you will enjoy your stay
Please leave the room before ten
The TV welcomes him as Ms Smith

Hotel Freedom is abandon and deserted
From arrivings and the leavings
The short relation, the sneaking ones
The married couple trying to remake
The seedy hotel far beyond it’s prime

Seedy Conzales

Seedy · Post by **Seedy** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 12:53 pm

LIZZYTYSH!!!!!!!

Where are you??????????????

seedy

Critic2 · Post by **Critic2** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 1:02 pm

had you kept to your reservation time, this entry would deffo.now be luxuriating in some winners' circle or other

Seedy · Post by **Seedy** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 2:21 pm

oh my!!!

Does this mean I will NOT win a box of muffins????

seedy

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 3:01 pm

Hi Seedy Conzales ~

Sorry. I had my nose in the book, luxuriating in your poem. Welcome to the Forum

. Love your punny name.

~ Lizzy

Seedy · Post by **Seedy** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 3:11 pm

Thank you Lizzttysh, and yes I love it too - much more than my former name which you will have to run a guess at

seedy

Critic2 · Post by **Critic2** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 7:25 pm

"box of muffins", isn't it impressive how that thread has run for so long. I want to thank the person who started it. You're welcome.

Seedy · Post by **Seedy** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 8:24 pm

Started by Partisan 10.dec. 2002, Comments & questions, Forum Members

partisan wrote:I do believe some of you may be unaware that there is a FREE BOX OF HOT MUFFINS to everyone who VOTES FOR ME! Now this should not be seen as bribery, rather an expression of gratitude for this kind show of support. Please do not ask for the muffins before voting, that WOULD be bribery, and I have high moral standards to maintain.

Happy Voting,
p.

Still want to thank the muffin-maker?

Seedy

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 8:32 pm

Dear Seedy ~

Haven't you noticed how terrible I am at guessing games? I couldn't even identify ~ for-sure for sure! ~ my dear friend, Helven's, poem

!

Okay ~ Are you Helven!?!

Seedy · Post by **Seedy** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 8:41 pm

Lizzytysh!

Use your brains - can Helven write poetry like me? - I think NOT!

Seedy

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 8:58 pm

Well, then, Welcome to the Late Entry section, Martine

! You still got that smell thing goin' on! Or, maybe it's me [since I did mention "stench"

]!

Seedy · Post by **Seedy** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 9:13 pm

Lizzytysh oh Lizzytysh!

You wouldn't even be able to smell a wet dog right next to you

Seedy not Martini

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 9:18 pm

LOL ~ My most accurate, intuitive insights come when I'm not trying ~ when they just happen! OK ~ I give! "Uncle!" Who th' hell are ya'

. Critic2? Addressing you formally

.

Seedy · Post by **Seedy** » Thu Nov 04, 2004 9:23 pm

Givin' up so soon?

Call the FBI or even better the C.I.A.

Seedy