In the late summer

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peter danielsen
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In the late summer

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As we together roll naked across the wet lawn
your long chaotic hair is whirled around
like sea grass released
in a mighty tidal wave
I have a firm grip on your buttocks
that you will never again disappear
when the flag salutes the starless blue late summer sky
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Re: In the late summer

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This reminds me very much of the myth of the Selkie.
The imagery is strong.
Thanks. :)
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Re: In the late summer

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I like the image Peter - it seems dreamlike

not to date myself but the rolling across the lawn reminds me of xtc's grass ... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ozu8KGFH-CU
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