Beyond the darkness

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peter danielsen
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Beyond the darkness

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But beyond the darkness there is a hideous light
Which illuminate the impurities of your face
Your wrinkles and the red edge around your eyes
Bathed in this light you are motivated
To raise the bitter drink
And in the mirrror
you faintly see
an angel with the hand on the switch
...I ..... .... ....... made . ..... ...... by ....... music .. ..... .. ......
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mat james
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Re: Beyond the darkness

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Great image Peter.
A bit like that red barrow of William Carlos Williams.
It is so contemporary, sadly.

Mat.
"Without light or guide, save that which burned in my heart." San Juan de la Cruz.
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lizzytysh
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Agreed!
Powerful images and implications.
Concise!

Well done, Peter!
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~ Oscar Wilde
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Byron
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Re: Beyond the darkness

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Mirrors are the curse of the withering classes......
"Bipolar is a roller-coaster ride without a seat belt. One day you're flying with the fireworks; for the next month you're being scraped off the trolley" I said that.
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