In Honour of the Sweetness of Manna.A start, please add/edit

[fishfishquaileye]

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That's what I have so far. I was trying to work in something about Manna. Obviously I will acknowledge anyone who posts further lines towards finishing this piece. I certainly won't ignore the attention and efforts of others.

[Manna]

The circular eye of the quailfish blinks
a strobe beneath the water's surface
pleading, "Notice me, notice me, I'm clever!"

The stream bounces like a Las Vegas toddler
happy, wavy and sparkly.

The fish - a sticky toy in a toddler's hand
dragged along because it's MINE.
The eye of the quailfish issues a tear,
but who can tell if a fish can cry
when tears are so easily dissolved?


~.~
Sorry I couldn't work in anything about myself. Maybe it's good enough that it was written by me.

[lizzytysh]

You're good, Manna.

[fishfishquaileye]

The circular eye of the quailfish blinks
a strobe beneath the water's surface
pleading, "Notice me, notice me, I'm clever!"

The stream bounces like a Las Vegas toddler
happy, wavy and sparkly.

The fish - a sticky toy in a toddler's hand
dragged along because it's MINE.
The eye of the quailfish issues a tear,
but who can tell if a fish can cry
when tears are so easily dissolved?


~.~
Sorry I couldn't work in anything about myself. Maybe it's good enough that it was written by me.

thanks for trying. I don't have the time at the moment to read your effort but I am sure it is promising.

[fishfishquaileye]

Manna, I have now read several words of your effort and it is deliberately provocative and callous. I demand an apology at an time soon from now or earlier. this is an place for you to set an example not to make an table.

[Manna]

Dear Quailfish,
Thanks you for reading my words. It means much to me to have others in the world reads my words. The callouses I cannot helps, since I is an player of stringed instruments, and I will not apologizes to you nor to anyone for being who I am. But, how dares you accuses me of making an provocative table? I would never in an million years does such an thing. I knows what table is used for, even without being provocative, and I does not support such insipid activities! I thought you knew me more better.

[fishfishquaileye]

Dear Quailfish,
Thanks you for reading my words. It means much to me to have others in the world reads my words. The callouses I cannot helps, since I is an player of stringed instruments, and I will not apologizes to you nor to anyone for being who I am. But, how dares you accuses me of making an provocative table? I would never in an million years does such an thing. I knows what table is used for, even without being provocative, and I does not support such insipid activities! I thought you knew me more better.

and I will not apologizes to you nor to anyone for being who I an, not even to Ann. I will appoint a committee to discuss the Table but we will need a Chair