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fishfishquaileye
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Bent over
Waiting
For a sudden thrust
Don't want to do it
But feel I fucking must
Cate
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that primal urge - love or kicking (read both ways)

the most curious/intriguing thing about this piece is the title
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fishfishquaileye wrote:Bent over
Waiting
For a sudden thrust
Don't want to do it
But feel I fucking must
you swore!
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Geoffrey wrote:
fishfishquaileye wrote:Bent over
Waiting
For a sudden thrust
Don't want to do it
But feel I fucking must
you swore!
only in the literal sense, not at all metaphorically
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I once had a rubber glove
handy for self-love


this is the rare proper use of the dreadful rhyme that I mentioned to Ruthy in her Rye-Nose thread.

Osteopath Geoffrey
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