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went to a hotel with my friend Martine
she told me not to act obscene
said I'd confused her, she's not the shrieker
that's her friend, the Poet Mareka
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booked a night in Hotel Lizzy
made love so long it left me dizzy
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:lol: Martine ~

Get off this thread, and see that you have almost 6 hours left.

~ Lizzy

Now, you know I can't get between all these feuds.
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only Young Dr Feud can do that


(6 hours?? you crazy? it's 19 minutes)
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you only say that because of the illegal and corrupt rule-change by the so-called "neutral" Lizzytish, allowing a further outrageous 6 hours for you to not write a poem.
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BAN IT
BAN IT
PAN IT

MARTINE HAS BLIGHTED THE GOOD REPUTATION OF ALL SEEDY HOTELS BY HER CONTEMPT FOR DEADLINES.
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Ah yes, I saw that you signed in at the front desk, Critic2, but never checked back to see your check-out time. Glad you enjoyed our accommodations. Hotel Lizzy has been cited in the best of Travel mags.
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I am afraid that I did not book in as I was told that
Hotel Lizzy
was far too busy
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booked a night in Hotel Lizzy
made love so long it left me dizzy
So, where did you end up? You should have asked at the front desk. They could have referred you to another 5-Star hotel. I hope your accommodations were up to snuff.
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Hotel Laurie, fine and sophisticated, attractive and beautifully preserved.
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Oh, that's good. We honour each other's bookings. I'm glad to see you found it on your own. I apologize for the mishap on your booking, however. We'll cover the costs for an extra night at the Hotel Laurie, or if you choose, the Hotel Lizzy. Either way, the accommodations will be fine. I'll arrange for a certificate to be sent. I'm certain your address is still in our computer.
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However ~ are you slipping, or just vouching for the quality of the hotel?
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