a fleeting thought
pools
as a single droplet of water
a luminous tear ebbs
a neglected son, a mocking daughter
a crimson blemish
taints asphalt
mingles,
shards of glass,
depressed steel
and jumbles of smoldering grass
trauma, pain
scars to heal
confusion, fear
they prey, they kneel
an indifferent moon postures,
a weeping mother mourns
squandered dreams
veiled
in a cloak of mystery
no last minute miracle
to mark history
no golden angel
taking flight
as the world stops turning
one candle snuffed out in the night
One Candle Snuffed Out In The Night
- fishfishquaileye
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Re: One Candle Snuffed Out In The Night
I'm thinking Coney Island amusement park! Am I right? It seems to me that you were describing the Big Parade but also I detected a tiny bit of negative emotion in the poem, as if your mind was wandering to something almost sad, like a family turning up on December 25th only to discover, for some unfathomable reason, the attraction was closed for the day. Anyway, good luck and I hope you make it safe to Coney next year!