My absent valentine

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Karren B
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Thank you hophead...I really hope it works out too (I think we both do)!

By the way, beware of all fishy things and Ironing fanatics! ;-)
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And make it a part of you.
It will give you strength'
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hophead wrote:I really like the honesty of this poem. We all do what we must do to get through. Judgement is for jerks, I hope this works out in your favor.
Jerks are for judges
unfit fishy bastards
sentence you to 20
press-ups
are for ironers
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Where the heck is the Like button for after I read your comment at the bottom of page 1, hophead!
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lizzytysh wrote:Where the heck is the Like button for after I read your comment at the bottom of page 1, hophead!
in our hearts, hopefully...
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Yes, it is there... :)
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
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love your new boots pic

I could see this as a song Karren. There are moments of vulnerability/self doubt Karren, that I think we all have but may not be comfortable exposing. Aside from structure and metre and all that jazz that you do well, I think that one of the things that you often bring forth with your pieces is that vulnerability.
I feel like I know how your N. feels, not in that specific way, but that questioning – of ‘what am I doing? and why am I still doing this?’. I wish I had advice for you but I don’t. I'm happy that everything seems right again and that your Valentine did arrive.

ohh the math … the advice wasn’t to ‘do the math’, it was to, ‘do math’ (actual math) and was advice given to me by Greg who I believe had a math agenda.
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