in a dank and squalid tavern
where passion is the fare
Cupid lingers like a hit man
you blend into the brass and oak
becoming ambiance
love is a mountain
you must climb from your stool
what a waste of time
you poor little sucker, you poor little fool
in a vacant parking lot
where shards of broken glass, gleam
as stars in the midnight sky
you pose on a decaying curbside
with hands upon your intuition, wondering why
the fall leaves blow wistfully
you breathe in air, crisp and cool
what a waste of time
you poor little sucker, you poor little fool
as scarlet tail lights fade
into the shadows of the night
you come to realise, that you’re alone
so it’s back to hunting in the streets
yes, hunting in the streets
Hunting In The Streets
Hunting In The Streets
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Re: Hunting In The Streets
i like this. good imageryhophead wrote:in a dank and squalid tavern
where passion is the fare
Cupid lingers like a hit man

Re: Hunting In The Streets
Do you have a tune to go with this, hophead?
Have you turned it into song?
I'd love to hear it.
Have you turned it into song?
I'd love to hear it.
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
~ Oscar Wilde
Re: Hunting In The Streets
Thanks Geoffrey and lizzytysh, no I have not put music to this as of yet.
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Re: Hunting In The Streets
hophead wrote:in a dank and squalid tavern
where passion is the fare
Cupid lingers like a hit man
you blend into the brass and oak
becoming ambiance
love is a mountain
you must climb from your stool
what a waste of time
you poor little sucker, you poor little fool
in a vacant parking lot
where shards of broken glass, gleam
as stars in the midnight sky
you pose on a decaying curbside
with hands upon your intuition, wondering why
the fall leaves blow wistfully
you breath in air, crisp and cool
what a waste of time
you poor little sucker, you poor little fool
as scarlet tail lights fade
into the shadows of the night
you come to realise, that you’re alone
so it’s back to hunting in the streets
yes, hunting in the streets
Hophead and I go back a long way, we saw Service together in World War 3 sometime in the 2030's, and of course the kids will always be a bond. Yet, tonight I feel sad, sad I feel and feel sad I. Hophead, years hence, in the playgrounds of our dotage, made me a solemn cow, and then instantly realised his mistake 3 weeks later and turned it into a solemn vow instead. Typical of Old Hoppie. But this is not a time to applaud him but sadly we must all go "Boo" together and many times indeed. He once said to me, in perfect rhyme "Never, Fish, will I mistake
a noun and a verb
cos if I do
I deserve to be thrown into
a lake"
Then, fuck me, look what he does
"you breath in air, crisp and cool"
I need to go and lie down.
FISH
Re: Hunting In The Streets
Many thanks old chum, have a good rest.fishfishquaileye wrote:Hophead and I go back a long way, we saw Service together in World War 3 sometime in the 2030's, and of course the kids will always be a bond. Yet, tonight I feel sad, sad I feel and feel sad I. Hophead, years hence, in the playgrounds of our dotage, made me a solemn cow, and then instantly realised his mistake 3 weeks later and turned it into a solemn vow instead. Typical of Old Hoppie. But this is not a time to applaud him but sadly we must all go "Boo" together and many times indeed. He once said to me, in perfect rhyme "Never, Fish, will I mistake
a noun and a verb
cos if I do
I deserve to be thrown into
a lake"
Then, fuck me, look what he does
"you breath in air, crisp and cool"
I need to go and lie down.
FISH
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