Who Am I
waking up to cold remorse
stiff movements chart the coarse
effort met halfway
broken strides bury the day
swept forward in midst of the swarm
reflective suggestive a common norm
I fear most before I die
I'll blink and say who am I
Salut
Elazar
Who Am I
Who Am I
breathe deep and live
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fishfishquaileye
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Re: Who Am I
You are a "common Norm". Do I win?
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fishfishquaileye
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Re: Who Am I
elazar wrote:Yes. Select your prize
Norm! Cheers!
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Dennis Dwight Baker
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Re: Who Am I
"I" is attached to reason/individual as "I AM" is attached to spirit/faith.
Who "AM I" and Who "I AM" walk together.
Who "AM I" and Who "I AM" walk together.
Re: Who Am I
Interesting, Dennis... sounds like the "perfect" balance I've been searching for all this time! Well done!
breathe deep and live
Re: Who Am I
A simple and concise reduction. I really enjoyed that, and especially conjunct elazar's poem."I" is attached to reason/individual as "I AM" is attached to spirit/faith.
Who "AM I" and Who "I AM" walk together.
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
~ Oscar Wilde