Heaven Is A Myth (when you ride a lame horse)

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hophead
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Heaven Is A Myth (when you ride a lame horse)

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shattered mirrors and burning ash dreams
dancing hag witches frayed at the seams
landscapes of sadness shed tears of remorse
because heaven is a myth when you ride a lame horse


burned out basements house alters of pain
windows of darkness hang like a stain
madness may taunt you then take you by force
because heaven is a myth when you ride a lame horse


portraits of doubt sketched by fearful men
odes of no value from the poets sick pen
desolation litters faiths uncharted course
because heaven is a myth when you ride a lame horse
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Re: Heaven Is A Myth (when you write a lame poem)

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hophead wrote: the
I like this very much, succinct and punchy. It's the definite article, well done!
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