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Moonshyne
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I would wrap myself in the silk
scarves of your words, just to let
them fall at your feet, one by one.

©12/31/2011 JLM
Cate
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:-)

I really like this - wonderful image.
Moonshyne
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Thank you Cate
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fishfishquaileye
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Moonshyne wrote:Thank you Cate
can I check please- you have not copyrighted this poem. the other day I was walking in Tornto and I was attacked by a large bear. it was about to eat me when Cate scared it off by looking at it with a strange face. for sure, Cate saved my life and I was just about to say "Thank you Cate" when I remembered that you always copyright your work. I guess this time you simply forgot so I played safe and didn't say a word to Cate. I am now concerned that she will think I'm rude and I wonder if you would let me tell her in bed later how grapefruit I am for her preserving my pointless existence.
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Cate scared it off by looking at it with a strange face
hummmm

I’m sorry Fish,
I have a confession, that - wasn’t really a bear. it was a fellow in a fur coat and wooly hat and I thought he was going to give you a coupon to beaver tails (which oddly serves pastry, not meat) but I’m trying to eat less sugar and they sprinkle a ton of sugar on their stuff and then cover it with icing and I knew that you would offer to share … so I gave him my best glare, my squintiest, dartiest eyes … which, as you pointed out, caused him to run.
I’m sorry that I told you that he was a bear. I know that fish are naturally afraid of bears and just wanted to impress you. Please stop telling people that I sleep with a grapefruit though, that is a secret and besides we are very much in love.

___

for the record J.
I do love this poem.
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fishfishquaileye
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Cate wrote:
Cate scared it off by looking at it with a strange face
hummmm

I’m sorry Fish,
I have a confession, that - wasn’t really a bear. it was a fellow in a fur coat and wooly hat and I thought he was going to give you a coupon to beaver tails (which oddly serves pastry, not meat) but I’m trying to eat less sugar and they sprinkle a ton of sugar on their stuff and then cover it with icing and I knew that you would offer to share … so I gave him my best glare, my squintiest, dartiest eyes … which, as you pointed out, caused him to run.
I’m sorry that I told you that he was a bear. I know that fish are naturally afraid of bears and just wanted to impress you. Please stop telling people that I sleep with a grapefruit though, that is a secret and besides we are very much in love.

___

for the record J.
I do love this poem.
you and me, or you and the grapefruit? just who is in love?
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you know I love you fish but

I meant the grapefruit and me ... before I ate it that is
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fishfishquaileye
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Cate wrote:you know I love you fish but

I meant the grapefruit and me ... before I ate it that is

Have you copyrighted your grapefruit? Don't you realise someone could steal it! If you have babies with her, will they be called Catefruits?

© until 2130, and again from midnight until 6 a.m.
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fishfishquaileye wrote:
Have you copyrighted your grapefruit?
no ... because that would be weird.
I was going to draw a big c on her but s/he rolled away.
If you have babies with her, will they be called Catefruits?
yes
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