The poet aint afraid

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peter danielsen
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The poet aint afraid

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Unlike anyone else
Death holds no horror for the poet
You’ll find him in the black room
Around midnight
With a needle full of Thelonious Monk
Directly into the heart
Waiting
While the horny little chap
Waves his sheet
On a withered stick
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Cate
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With a needle full of Thelonious Monk
I like that,
I imagine a smoke filled room and a thin raspy voiced beat poet surrounded by lots of artsy people.
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I like the whole poem for its moribund nature,
heavy heavy with atmosphere.
Thelonious Monk is the perfect choice for its sense of discord.
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
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lonndubh
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peter danielsen wrote:While the horny little chap
Waves his sheet
On a withered stick
I like that Peter !!
Great atmosphere and ambiance


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