Two Cold Feets

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LaurieAK
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Two Cold Feets

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Cold Feet

Under down
You'd think my feet
Like the fowl been sacrificed
would get warmed by feathers
In Alaskan chilly winter's
Nights up north
Down.
Under.
Two Feet.
Cold.


Cold Feet II

Come meet
Under sheet
Cold feet
I repeat,
Frozen feet
Nada heat
Warmth delete
Below seat
Two neat
Chilly feet
Strolled street
Stormy, sleet
Now greet
2 beat
Fffreeezing Fffeet.


Just plain silliness,
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rick
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:lol:
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lizzytysh
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Post by lizzytysh »

Your poem captures this Piscean's heart and feet :D , Laurie. I haven't lived in Alaska, but it sure takes me back to some nights ~ and days ~ in northern Michigan.
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