...almost an Atheist

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mat james
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...almost an Atheist

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...almost an Atheist

Cause and effect
or affect?
Stardust to worm
virus to cell
meat-ball to man

it all evolves to make sense;
dust to tears
egg to me
ego to know-all
who cares?
It’s all the same story
only different characters

and those atheists
hold the moral high ground
(Except maybe for Joey Stalin).

Who needs a god in all this cartooned existence?

Not me;
I’d dance anyway

yes,
I’m almost an a-theist
it’s cool be one, and
I love the view

…if it wasn’t for that moment;
that ... ~.......stumbling-skip in the hallway…


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"Without light or guide, save that which burned in my heart." San Juan de la Cruz.
Cate
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Re: ...almost an Atheist

Post by Cate »

oh what the difference the placement of an a makes ... or I guess it would be the placement of a space. Effect/affect it's such a confusion ... just who created who?
…if it wasn’t for that moment,
that, singular step in the hallway…
I like how we dance along in this - it's fun, light, has a good rhythm and then

we stop

and we are left wondering what happened in the hallway!?
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That one might be a-gnosis. ;-)
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Re: ...almost an Atheist

Post by rmorgan »

"I kind of feel the same way ..."!

A brilliant ending, there in the hallway ....

Thank you, dear Poet!
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